雅思基础写作1

Academic Writing的特殊要求

英美拼写混用

英式-se结尾/美式-ze结尾

英式含有-our的单词/美式用or

英式-tre结尾/美式ter结尾

文体错误

剑八例句：

Therefore this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

1)所有格 ’s 不属于缩写

2)一些默认的源自拉丁文的缩写可用

e.g. – for example, i.e. – that is to say

用词无特色

Young people's crime→youth crime/juvenile delinquency

crime→offence(criminal activity)

harm→damage(The UK was blamed for undermining international efforts to reduce pollution) The advantages of space research are more than the disadvantages.(outweigh)

表达过分口语化

Scientists have presented lots of evidence for climate change.

many/a large number of

a great deal of/a large amount of

want（需要）--be eager for, desire

Those who are eager for happiness need noble close friends.

bad（消极的/负面的）--negative, damaging, harmful, deteriorating, inferior

例句：

The inferior medical facilities in some rural areas are harmful to the treatment.

Measures need to be carried out to improve the deteriorating environment.

good（积极的/正面的）--positive, effective, beneficial, constructive, superior

例句：

It is a beneficial practice to set up kindergartens near the communities.

Women are superior than men to some extent.

This enable us to find constructive ways to cope with the challenge.

句式过于干瘪短促

Junk food advertisement are everywhere.They attract the attention of young consumers. (attracting)

They tend to be more independent.This is an important factor in academic study and research.(which)