短文改错

(建议用时: 40分钟)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误;

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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(2013·吉林模拟)

Dear Dad,

You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food.

Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving daughter,

Mary

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(2013·广元模拟) Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. When I went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale.